Before we showed our target audience our rough cut to gain feedback, we showed Luke to see if it was to the best ability of a rough cut. This is what he had to say:
1) Overall our music video is too slow.
2) we need faster and more frequent cuts to match the beat of the music.
3) It would be better if there was more closeups of movement, much like the movement of her legs, rather then showing her face to the audience straight away. There needs to be more of a build up.
4) The fast cuts that mix the UV set with the blinders towards the end are good but he wants to see more of these throughout the video and for them to be introduced infall of the chorus's rather then just the one.
5) It would be better to use the UV set in all of the chorus's.
6) Luke wants us to use the set with the tone in it at the very beginning of the video rather then mixing it towards the end. Start with light and then go into dark, much like the process of day and night.
7) Only use the binders set in parts of the song when there is no use for the other sets. Otherwise the blinders set gets overused.
8) Needs more of a variation of cuts and the shot sizes.
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